Date/Time: Oct. 19/ 05:00~06:00pm
Location: at lake Ella
Topic/Skill: Our high school lives/ Speaking
and editing
Feedback provided to tutor, Neila: I brought
my blogger writings and she edited them. Thanks to her I could make sentences without
worrying about making errors. On the
other hand, I did not try to edit my writings by myself because I could help
from her. Some errors would have been
found by myself if I had proofread it.
Others could not have been found. Even though I could get help from a tutor or
teacher, I have to edit my writing first. I was with Aviv, her boyfriend as well. He came
from Israel, but has American citizenship, so can get a job here and has it now.
Thanks to his job he could learn English through his body, and it worked well. I said to them about my high school life which
was hard to me, and Neila told me about her fun and happy life in a high school
dorm.
Lesson(s) about tutoring and/or the tutor you learned: I should use no article
after ‘graduate from’ because it does not matter which college s/he graduated
from in my sentence. She lived in
Brittany in France which was so cold in winter, and there were apple trees everywhere. Cider means apple alcohol, which is totally
different from the meaning of it in Korea, Sprite. Moonshine is more strong
alcohol made out of apples.
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